Updated Front Cover Draft

After receiving feedback from my teachers, I have been working on improving my front cover draft as I believe the first draft was not up to the standard I will be happy with for my final piece. I have looked back through my research and planning posts on my blog and also took inspiration from other sources and have produced an updated version. For this version I have made many alterations including the photos, colour scheme  masthead positioning and size, coverlines and other minor alterations. I think the front cover and double page spread were the pages that needed the most adjustments so I am concentrating on these two pages primarily then will improve the contents page accordingly.