I think it is really important that you have pulled out examples from your product to evidence your points. You have still got areas you can write about here, such as layout, content of your DPS and the fact that you have chosen to use expletives 'we are the shit' on the cover and images of the artists smoking etc. Also, the fact that you have avoided the shorter Q and A style interview and used a longer style article, lends itself to a more serious audience who love midis and the bands themselves.
I think it is really important that you have pulled out examples from your product to evidence your points. You have still got areas you can write about here, such as layout, content of your DPS and the fact that you have chosen to use expletives 'we are the shit' on the cover and images of the artists smoking etc. Also, the fact that you have avoided the shorter Q and A style interview and used a longer style article, lends itself to a more serious audience who love midis and the bands themselves.
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